Post the Three-Hundred and Thirty-Seventh - Need more better wordz!

[nestar]

I submitted my remix story, "Years and Hours" to whofic.com and it was rejected due to having  "speech incorrectly punctuated".

Is there anyone out there who'd be willing to take a red pen to this?

Comments

[erinm-4600.livejournal.com]

O.O

*points to alchemistc*

You DO exist!

[alchemistc.livejournal.com]

I...do? lol, yeah, I do. Sometimes. Although I've been lurking again.

[erinm-4600.livejournal.com]

*flails more*

I have missed you :)

[alchemistc.livejournal.com]

I've been in Ironman fandom. Oh NOES!! Though I have been reading California Tin and not commenting on it. Bad me! I should go do that now.

[erinm-4600.livejournal.com]

RDJ! O.o

*drools a little*

No worries... Just glad to "see" you :)

[erinm-4600.livejournal.com]

Tropic Thunder was HILARIOUS....

*wipes away tears*

So wrong... yet so FANTASTIC....
I need to watch Iron Man again...

DUDE: Incredible Hulk ;D

[alchemistc.livejournal.com]

"I'm a LEAD FARMER, mothafucka!!!" "I've been a bad, bad boy, father."

Oh dear lord.

Only part I've seen of Incredible Hulk is the part where Tony Stark enters the bar like he's the main event of the Second Coming.

Which he totally is.

[erinm-4600.livejournal.com]

Which he totally is.

That was the part I meant...

DUDE 2: SATAN'S ALLEY Tobey FTW.

[alchemistc.livejournal.com]

Heh. I'm really incredibly fond of the music!Rosary-bead hand holding going on. God. That movie was insane amounts of funny.

[erinm-4600.livejournal.com]

I will not like Ben Stiller.
I will not like Ben Stiller.
I will not -Good GOD that man is ripped!
I will not like Ben Stiller.

[alchemistc.livejournal.com]

That's what I was thinking the whole movie. And LOL at "Ben Stiller's Nephew" suddenly being "Matthew McConaughey's Son"

He was actually semi-okay in this one. Even though he was once again carried along by way funnier people. See: Etan Cohen, RDJ, Jay Baruchel!!! (love him), Brandon T Jackson and his love for Lance Bass...

I do not like Ben Stiller.

I do not like Ben Stiller.

I do not like that Ben Stiller made the FUNNIEST MOVIE EVER!!

[erinm-4600.livejournal.com]

o/ *high five*

[alchemistc.livejournal.com]

ol. Of course RDJ. Love that man to pieces. Which is why I have now seen Tropic Thunder three times. And Iron Man about twelve.

And hijacked this thread to talk about him.

[erinm-4600.livejournal.com]

I have that effect.... ;)

Good thing SOMEONE loves me :)

[alchemistc.livejournal.com]

Right, like I'm the only one.

[erinm-4600.livejournal.com]

:p

Did you feel the waves of love last week?

[alchemistc.livejournal.com]

This is when I realize I'm out of the loop. Waves? of Love?

[erinm-4600.livejournal.com]

Author Appreciation Week...

You -and the etchings- got much love...

[alchemistc.livejournal.com]

How did I mis that??

God, I am out of the loop. I always know when people are talking about me!!!

[erinm-4600.livejournal.com]

No idea....

everyone kinda kept it in their own LJs... I need to go through the F-list at tinman_fic again...

See where else I'm causing trouble...

[n-e-star.livejournal.com]

Um... I haven't seen either yet.

But...

::smushs "Hearts and Souls"::

[alchemistc.livejournal.com]

Do it, now, mothafucka!!

Okay, that was uncalled for profanity, but really. They need seeing.

"Hearts and Souls"? *is confused*

[n-e-star.livejournal.com]

On the same night as a bus accident kills four people, Thomas is born. And he spends his childhood being able to see and talk to the ghosts, that is until he is told that he needs to give up his "imaginary friends", so they stop showing themselves.

Fast forward twenty (or so) years. The ghosts find out that they were attached to Thomas so they could get a chance to finish their unfinished business.

RDJ really shines in this as he plays his role, but also has to take on the mannerisms of the four actors that play the ghosts.

[erinm-4600.livejournal.com]

*swoons*

OMG! The bus... and the letter... and the singing...
*gets misty*