Post the Three-Hundred and Thirty-Seventh - Need more better wordz!

[nestar]

I submitted my remix story, "Years and Hours" to whofic.com and it was rejected due to having  "speech incorrectly punctuated".

Is there anyone out there who'd be willing to take a red pen to this?

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[n-e-star.livejournal.com]

Um... I haven't seen either yet.

But...

::smushs "Hearts and Souls"::

[alchemistc.livejournal.com]

Do it, now, mothafucka!!

Okay, that was uncalled for profanity, but really. They need seeing.

"Hearts and Souls"? *is confused*

[n-e-star.livejournal.com]

On the same night as a bus accident kills four people, Thomas is born. And he spends his childhood being able to see and talk to the ghosts, that is until he is told that he needs to give up his "imaginary friends", so they stop showing themselves.

Fast forward twenty (or so) years. The ghosts find out that they were attached to Thomas so they could get a chance to finish their unfinished business.

RDJ really shines in this as he plays his role, but also has to take on the mannerisms of the four actors that play the ghosts.

[erinm-4600.livejournal.com]

*swoons*

OMG! The bus... and the letter... and the singing...
*gets misty*