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nestar ([personal profile] nestar) wrote2008-04-04 01:10 am

A Peep Into The Future 1/1

Okay, I was not expecting to post anything today. Then Steve saw my copy of "Peter Pan". If this doesn't make sense blame him.

 

For two years life had gone on in the pattern that had been set right after the eclipse, Raw had taken on the work of healing anyone who came to the castle, Glitch had found a way to reconnect with his “other half” and was once again advisor to the Queen, and Cain was still looking after DG.

At this moment it was more like looking for DG.

The two of them were riding out to visit villages in the West. This afternoon when they had gotten to the next village on the list there had been a fair set up. DG had promptly thrown herself into the fun, leaving Cain to follow behind her. But some time between the maypole and ring of fire jugglers DG had slipped away.

Cain had looked around where he had last saw her, then started working outwards. His search had taken him over most of the open fairground, all that was left was a short row of tents.

Most of the tents had a sign in front announcing just what form of entertainment could be found inside, but one tent... An old woman stepped into the sunlight and looked at Cain. “Yes, for you... I'll read.” She turned around and walked back into the tent and without thinking Cain followed her.

“Sit. Hold this.” A mirror was put on the table and Cain placed both his hands onto the sides of it.

The mirror fogged over, then cleared to show DG. She was in the room, there were boxes and cases around her. The door opened and Cain walked into the room. Cain could see that his mirror self seemed to be talking, arguing, with DG, but there was no sound.

The mirror fog over again and when it cleared this time Cain saw a window. Through the window he could see DG. She seemed happy, maybe celebrating something? Glitch and Raw where there, Az and her parents where there, but... Cain looked at the crowd of people and could see no sign of him being there.

Suddenly he saw himself.

Mirror Cain was outside looking in the window. Cain watched as he went over to the window and knocked on. He could see the him in the mirror calling for DG, but DG didn't even look up.

The only thing that happened was a man Cain had never seen before walked up to the window, stared at Cain for a moment, then pulled the sash to let the curtain fall.

Before the curtain covered everything Cain could see the man walk over and stand next to DG.

The mirror fogged and went back to being a mirror.

Cain looked at the old woman, “What does it mean?”

“The mirror shows what your life can be.”

Cain thought about the images he had seen and something inside of him revolted.

“That is not how my life will be.” Cain stood up and walked to the door.

“She was leaving you!” Cain stopped in mid stride.

“Your love was leaving you. Why should she stay?” Cain closed his eyes. This was... This was the part of him that he kept shoved down.

“What have you to offer?” Cain could feel the old woman walk up behind him.

“You are incomplete.” She hissed in his ear.

Cain whirled around, “No!”

“Let's look to the future, shall we?” The old woman gestured to the mirror. “You fly to her and... what;s this? The window's closed.”

“I'll open it.”

The old woman sneered, “I'm afraid the window's barred.”

“I'll call out her name.” Cain said, then, as the old woman said “She can't hear you.” he remembered how well that had worked in the mirror vision.

“No! Cain cried.

“She can't see you.” The old woman circled him.

“DG!”

“She's forgotten all about you.”

At that Cain broke, “Stop it! Please! Stop it!”

The old woman ignored his cries. “And what is this? There is an other in your place.”

Cain just stood in silence.

“He is called... Husband.”

For a minute Cain just stood there, eyes closed and head bowed. Then a sound came to him, the sound of DG laughing.

Cain walked out the door of the tent and saw DG standing just a few feet away.

“Cain! How long have you been in there? I've been looking for you everywhere.”

The mirror shows what your life can be.

“Nothings set in stone.”

DG cocked her head to one side, “You okay Cain?”

Cain looked at her, “No, I'm not.”

He walked over and pulled her to him. In her ear he softly said, “This is yours, and always will be.”, then he kissed her.


[identity profile] moony-blues.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 05:20 am (UTC)(link)
I like it! I'm actually kinda speechless... Um...yeah. Awesome!

*is speechless*

[identity profile] n-e-star.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 03:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, I made you speechless. ::happy dance::

[identity profile] magickboxgirl.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 05:49 am (UTC)(link)
Wow *agrees with Moony_blues* totaly speechless.

[identity profile] n-e-star.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 03:23 pm (UTC)(link)
::happy dance::

[identity profile] erinm-4600.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 01:00 pm (UTC)(link)
I need to go to WalMart and but a copy of Hook now... so that I can be happy again...
*dies*
Sadly... no amount of Jason Isaacs will make me feel better :(
*sniff*

Love you!!

[identity profile] n-e-star.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 02:27 pm (UTC)(link)
What is this blaspheme you speak?!

In what universe can Robin Williams and Dustin Hoffman beat the wonder that is JI?!

[identity profile] erinm-4600.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 02:39 pm (UTC)(link)
it's all about the food fight, baby.... :D

[identity profile] erinm-4600.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 03:23 pm (UTC)(link)
No... that's:

Rufio! Rufio! RUE FEE OHHHHHHHH

[identity profile] ex-nadeshiko480.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 01:42 pm (UTC)(link)
I LOVE Peter Pan!
The way you used the reference was sooo cute in this!
It's kind of like a reality check for Cain becsuse, if he doesn't do something, he'll lose DG forever.
I now have this urge to go out and find a copy of Peter Pan or watch Hook.

[identity profile] n-e-star.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 03:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Or make DG/Cain vids to the PP soundtrack.

[identity profile] goflo.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 06:33 pm (UTC)(link)
awwwwwwwww.

*applauso!*

[identity profile] trystan830.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 06:55 pm (UTC)(link)
*pretends to understand all the references*

very cool though.

[identity profile] saniz.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 07:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Great story, I loved it.

Jason Isaacs was awsome the best PP, and he played both characters like he was supposed to.

[identity profile] brunette89.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 10:00 pm (UTC)(link)
This was amazing, and therefore, I cried. I love it. <3

[identity profile] n-e-star.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 05:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh wow! I made you cry? That is so... wow!

[identity profile] brunette89.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 10:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes. It was great!!

[identity profile] diva0789.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 12:52 am (UTC)(link)
wow....this was really good. and ive never seen Hook but i have seen the live action version of Peter Pan that came out a few years ago ( along with the cartoon but i dont think that counts) and i love that version...( i thought the kid who played peter was hot!)

but yeah, good work!

[identity profile] n-e-star.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 03:55 pm (UTC)(link)
The dialog came from the 2003 "Peter Pan". The actors, the writing, the scenery, the music... everything was wonderful!

[identity profile] lattelady6.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 01:17 am (UTC)(link)
Great story! All it took was a little nudge and he saw the light! That was very sweet.

[identity profile] n-e-star.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 02:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, well... I was thinking of having it end after "He is called... Husband.", but I like happy endings way too much.

[identity profile] transgenic-girl.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 05:57 am (UTC)(link)
I can't decide whether to wibble or flail.

It's gorgeous.

[identity profile] n-e-star.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 05:57 pm (UTC)(link)
::Blushes:: Thanks you.

[identity profile] yadwhiga.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 12:15 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG this is beatiful!! Direct to my memories :D

[identity profile] n-e-star.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 02:48 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm blushing now.

[identity profile] neefalco.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 05:35 pm (UTC)(link)
fantastic!!

[identity profile] lattelady6.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 11:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Very lovely. I could see it happening.